Author Topic: Words never knew  (Read 94 times)

Offline Mirage

Words never knew
« on: April 20, 2017, 11:00:23 PM »
Words from the voice box never did know
They cut deep chasms causing hurts galore
It took me awhile to cease your pain
And make confessions my ego strained
I knew long after I pricked your heart
I should’ve done something just from the start
I wish to reciprocate the actual truth
The innermost forbidden fact, I deceived
Recapitulate my pretension, alter and make up
For all that I did miss, fearing I will miss
But the delusional optimism of “happily ever after”
Mocked at me every time I saw u falter
I therefore decided to live in my fantasy
Shrivel and wither my heart dead within me…

hope u guys like it  ::) punctuation kandukadhinga >_<
« Last Edit: April 20, 2017, 11:02:54 PM by Mirage »

Offline SwaranGaL

Re: Words never knew
« Reply #1 on: April 23, 2017, 01:01:37 PM »
It is a very different poem or is it only me? Lol. Your creativity of writing that syncs to link with the  choice of words goes hand in hand and related every line. I liked the entire poem, may be there can be a better title. I find that this poem is written in a very conscious or may be that it is inspired by someone to u etc😊 thanks for the share mirage😊may be if I have said anything wrong let me know😊
« Last Edit: April 23, 2017, 01:30:47 PM by SwaranGaL »

Offline ReeNa

Re: Words never knew
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2017, 05:06:05 PM »
Hi enigs.....thank you for sharing this poem.
When i read this poem the thing tht came to my mind important words are.Good one sis..Creatively written.Keep writting sis.

Offline Mirage

Re: Words never knew
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2017, 12:01:44 PM »
Tysm wave and reena sis...yes i wrote it for someone and ppl who know abt that will understand it better  :) ty for your time and comments..i should have given a gist of what it was about ana tharale lol...i will tell u guys in pvt msg u will understand it better yes wave na title elam u haven't said anything wrong lol almost u guessed  :D

Offline EmiNeM

Re: Words never knew
« Reply #4 on: May 20, 2017, 06:24:32 PM »
Nice poem mirage.